>>245555 Why is it a contest? Both are gross, end of discussion. But christ, Saiya, butter some rolls or bread or some shit. The girl is mad.

>>245555 Neither. Also, that wasn't the point.

>>245509 So saiya's plan is to make Tessa so fat she'll no longer be able to stalk her or go outside? Is this legal? Tessa seems too mind broken at this point to really stand up for herself much like Stockholm syndrome. At some point this is gonna just be abuse rather than just feeling really horny about the situation.

>>245521 >>245534 This isnt 4chan during 2010s, saying fag like it’s a catchphrase is cringe and try hardy. Go be a nuisance somewhere else you angsty teenager

>>245583 fag

>>245583 fag

>>245583 try gettin ya dick hard faggot

>>245583 𝓗𝓸𝓶𝓸𝓼𝓮𝔁𝓾𝓪𝓵

>>245582 Kinda feels like the comic crossed a line here and that it's a straight-up declaration that Saiya and Tessa will never have a normal romantic relationship. Kip is doubling down on Saiya to develop 0 feelings of romance towards Tessa, opting for going down this weird abusive path instead. Sorry, SxT fans. Buuut then again, Kip does have a tendency to be limp-wristed when sticking to certain convictions so maybe the significance of this ordeal will just be blown over, who knows. Annoying if true but that's speculation at this point.

Although it's not wholly unsalvageable for people who aren't into the whole 'mind-break' aspect. It would be kinda hot to see Tessa embrace some of this insanity voluntarily on her accord... Maybe if Saiya invoked Aika's name and that enflames Tessa to continue in order to outdo her rival... >*Tessa struggling to keep down the second block of butter* >"Amazing! I don't even think Aika could do three~" >*Saiya smiles on as Tessa reaches for block #3, renewed fire in her eyes* I mean, it would still be emotional manipulation from Saiya but we're just writing her off as evil at this point so whatevs, lol.

>>245509 Straight out of a cartoon >>245521 >”Weight gain comic” >>245555 Both. Both suck ass. Butter on its own is gross, I have no idea how bitches be eating entire sticks of it. Coming from someone who tried to. >>245609 I feel like this was pretty obvious from the beginning. Saiya has only ever shown lust towards Tessa, and that’s it. It doesn’t matter even if they literally have sex because Saiya immediately regrets it afterwards. This was shown even before Saiya was with Aika

>>245618 People aren't static and unevolving. True she initially declared that was her intention but to not entertain a single romantic thought about Tessa after all this time must take some active loathing on her part (or hamfisted writing on Kip's part).

>>245509 Could you imagine the shits Tessa would have after this? Kip could seriously one up his Tessa puking scene...

>>245583 Kek, what a fucking newfag

>>243951 Noticed how the file name is called saiya5 How many edits are there that have been made public?

>>245583 We're going to vote people into office who will imprison and execute you!

>>245739 Erm...is more like i fuck up a few times and kept editing until i was satisfied. Im waiting for more interesting panels of Saiya.

>>245583 This fag will bitch when fictional girls eat butter but he’ll happily gobble down dick all day and act like there’s nothing wrong with that Queer

Yer a fag 'arry

>>245621 Yeah the only upside of stuffing Tessa with concentrated dairy would be the major diarrhea, but no chance kip would even refer to that

>>245609 Having a girl prisoner that you lock in a room and torture and abuse is certainly a kink, but I feel like it's not really the type of kink that typical fat girl fans are looking for? We just wanna see fat boobs go squish, not really abusive psycho drama

The Saiya Insanity Arc continues! Page 572 up.

>>245908 So it seems Kip is leaning more for Saiya to be cracked than malicious, fair enough says I. One silver lining for those leery of the abusive psychodrama is this one telling line here: >"Can't do more than one at a-" To me, that doesn't immediately scream that Tessa is feeling like the subject of abuse or being tortured. It would sort of suggest that she's actually willing to be on board the depravity train were it to be meted out in a saner fashion (which regrettably for her, is definitely not the case). So I guess it's just degenerate weirdos being weird. It does paint a grisly future picture of Tessa being some gross sordid "butter-wife" of Saiya's, now immobile after having taken a liking to the ill-treatment but eh - que será, será.

Yep, the majority of the fans seem to be eating this up, which is the opposite of how I loved the rat eating scene and they didn't, so indeed que sera sera

>>245908 Tessa gonna choke next page

>>245912 My distaste for this scene has definitely eased up now that I know Tessa's sorta into it. She's wanting Saiya to slow down, not stop. The crazy train has no breaks though, alas. Open wiiide. >>245916 I'm still holding out for Tessa to take the reins and see things through like a champ were Saiya to compare her to Aika over the course of this. Lest we forget that Tessa is also kinda batshit as well.

>>245908 We're finally getting to some elite fetish content and all anybody can do is whine about it.

>>245908 I don't think sticks of butter bend like that

Tessa rn

How long do i have to wait until Tessa reaches this size?

>>245987 Forever. She’s at kip’s max right now. >>245945 I still stand on business that eating butter sticks is gross. >>245908 The 3rd panel is nice. Kip could actually make this comic progress by having Saiya admit she likes doing this to Aika and Tessa, having fantasies about it until she actually decides to do it irl. I mean, this could’ve happened back at the eating contest between Aika and Tessa when Saiya was fondling both of them but whatever.

>>245987 In feederism fetish comic logic, this butter stuffing is going to also work out as a way for Tessa to catch up to Aika. Given Tessa's drive for stuffing herself on her own time (see pic), if she feels this is an arms race that she can win, I could see her wanting to overtake Aika as being "the biggest" in a bid to win Saiya, so who knows? Butter stuffing may have supercharged this race! Reminds me a little of Hayabusa's Sweet Debul when the crazy antagonist makes a return at the end.

Kips reply surprised me.

>>246024 Is it really that surprising? Long-form fetish comics are among the harder stories to write for because, precisely as Kip says, you're catering to two camps: the plot crowd and the fetish crowd. And sadly these two groups are at odds with one another. To illustrate: The plot crowd want to sit down and sink their teeth into a thirteen-course banquet; the fetish crowd are only here for ice cream. Indulging the banquet-goers drags things out for the impatient ice cream enjoyers, bored and uncaring about the dining experience; indulging the ice cream lovers with ice cream breaks further prolongs the dinner as a whole from the frequent interruptions and, at worst, can make the flow of the banquet muddled and confusing. Chocolate syrup and sprinkles over the salmon and whatnot. I'm not suggesting that one can't enjoy both plot and fetish content or that one is superior to the other, but it is an extremely dificult balancing act without a proper harmonious plan behind it. Reacting to the calls from either extreme creates a lose-lose situation wherein no-one is happy. Also, the longer a story goes on, the less planning there is behind it and as such there is less plot cohesion. As the story clumsily lurches between two gears of plot and fetish, they feel increasingly disconnected with one another, creating this meandering or cyclical feeling. If I had one piece of advice to tell comic creators and writers it would be this: tell the story you want and shut out the voices surrounding you, even if that means developing a thicker skin and telling people to shut the fuck up. Fanbases ae fucking poison when it comes to knowing what they want..

>>246024 By this logic Tessa should be twice her size by now, and Saiya also on the fat train. >Throws fans under the bus to justify the non existent plot. This is pure bullshit, seems like hell make any excuse to avoid ending his prized comic. And lets not forget how he treats anyone that does go with the herd. or even dares to whine about his writing.

>>246024 He's such a lying fucker. He knows this is bullshit, he's just too arrogant to admit he's 571 pages into one of the most inept story lines in fetish comics and has no idea how to get out of the hole he dug.

>>246025 It's weird that I, a fan of vore, vomit and scat, get put into the "wants plot but not fetish" bucket ! I like fetishes it's just...when you have a 600 page plot that starts to make no sense at all, it doesn't really seem like reusing the same characters for the same fetishes has any purpose. I agree that creators should generally ignore fans and pursue their own goals. You will see this advice everywhere in video game development forums. Fans are toxic by nature

>>246029 Oh yeah, I'm not defending Kip's more dubious plot or charcater decisions - there were plenty of ways to tie this story up much much sooner but we have slowly sailed past each mooring point down this wild river. The silver lining is that characters do end up going a bit wilder and extreme in more pointed efforts to impart upon the readers and to get the plot yanked back into line. We probably wouldn't have had "Aika eating back-to-back eating challenges" or "Saiya manically forcefeeding Tessa butter" in a saner story route. Flanderizing is normally not a good thing, but for a fetish comic? Eh, sometimes you get some fun moments in navigating the wild rapids. Enjoy the chaos.

>>246024 WHAT PLOT? No actually, what is the fucking plot of this comic? A dipshit trying to get with 2 girls way out of her league? Kip has been looping this comic for 572 pages straight, nothing has been actually happening, there’s been zero progress. Even the fucking “sexy-times” are the same thing over and over, it’s are starting to get old. Like this scene with Tessa right here is either going to end with one of them crying, or Saiya crying at home. How do we know? Because it happens every. single. time. Saiya always regrets what she does with Tessa yet for some unknown reason keeps going back. (The ‘unknown reason’ is likely Kip trying to find any excuse to use Tessa again since she’s the ‘fan favorite’) And PLEASE don’t tell me the plot Kip is talking about is that stupid shit with Saiya’s childhood. Because no one cares. It’s such an ass plot point that doesn’t even make sense. I don’t even have to talk about the fan service because everyone knows Kip is lying out of his ass. Aika and Tessa would be doorframe wrecking huge by now if he was being truthful.

>>246031 The romance plot is clear inasmuch as it's about the lovelife of Saiya and the choices presented with the two girls - will she settle on Tessa? Aika? or some altenate third option altogether? The narrative, the journey, aka "what we do along the way to get there", has been a meandering mess, true. One wonders how much the narrative could have bene had Kip stuck to their guns and not caved into pressure at the time, but what's done is done. While the current story is probably a far cry from what Kip had initially envisioned, it's been at the very least interesting to see Saiya lose her mind, Tessa become a freak and Aika become this dommy glutton. It's not good but it's entertaining to just see things go off the rails for this strange trio.

>>246033 >...how much the tighter the narrative could have been had...

>>246024 >keep up the pace of the plot lol lmao, even nobody would be complaining about a lack of fanservice if plot points actually resolved and led to some closure or catharsis, they would be glazing kip for being an "amazing deep fetish writer"

>>246024 Kip seriously thinks he's moving the plot anywhere? The plot has essentially been frozen for over 3 years now. Page 38 from July 2021 you find out Saiya likes Aika's fat body but respects her. Tessa jealous of Aika. Page 45 is the Saiya goes over Tessa's house and Tessa self soda bloats. Saiya liked that, now she's conflicted. Boom, exposition was over. Somehow, this same exact exposition being told again over the last 500 pages has been moving the plot, really? What has changed in even the slightest plot wise? Even fat wise, Tessa looks like she's gained 50 pounds tops. Aika gained none, I think? A series of random characters proofed in and out of existence with no bearing on the plot. Church man, gym trainer girl, Saiya's sister, bitch girl who got written out of the main cast. Kip's writing is equivalent to a grade schooler copy and pasting his introduction paragraph to pad out the length requirement of his paper.

Page 573 up.

>>246188 If it hasn't already been said a million times Saiya is actually mental this is just hard to read. Gonna keep reading tho :)))

>>246188 I do lowkey hate how it's rewarding Saiya's insane and selfish plan, but damned if these two degenerates weren't perfectly made for one another. Tessa being on board with this brings this to a whole new level, maddeningly so!

>>246188 Legally it's questionable, morally it's unpleasant, personally I like it.

>>246188 Nothing is gonna happen, next or next chapter Saiya will feel guilty for Tessa and the plot will again start to repeat in a circular loop. Atleast Kip is still is still keeping the weight gain going around on Aika and Tessa, but it's super slow. Honestly, this comic is now like "Rent a Girlfriend" of fat fetish comics. I wouldn't even be surprised if a one day Kip just drops a full Saiya cuck scene.

>>246196 It's donald trump levels of this amount of evil and stupid shouldn't keep working yet it does

>>246188 Why Tessa has two navels in the second panel? Is he fucking tracing AI?