>>294602
Its the most loose definition of art. Making the models sure, but the "story" and pacing are just the worse. Every story is just the same where "she was a healthy active girl...until she wasn't". The pacing is also shit with these weird "new chapters" every 5 pages and the way the girl barely gains weight until the last 5 pages where she suddenly becomes immobile. The munchies comic for example the redhead took 95% of the comics pages to get immobile but then her friend went from chubby to immobile in the last 5 pages. That doesn't mean I want to see her friend take as long as the red hair to get immobile, but at least cut a bit of the filler.
Even the aspect ration itself sucks. Just do the usual portrait mode that everyone else does and no this weird 16:1 ratio where I have to 5x zoom in to see anything. It gives you more room to work with and potentially create some unique panels.
And for the love of fuck cut down on the text. This isn't Hunter x Hunter.