>>298841 Kipteitei and Pixiveo are probably the ones that started the trend of making comics over 100 pages long because before that i cant think of anyonr else. Other artists then saw that they werent getting backlash for it so they also wanted a piece of the pie too.

I miss when SweetDreamCoffee did traps. That's what got them popular in the first place.

>>298851 I dont remember SDC making trap content. I only remember the one comic where a guy gained weight instead of a girl.

>>298852 When they got their start on deviantart everything they did was male (most of it is still on patreon). I lost interested when they stopped drawing Astolfo.

>>298869 Didnt know they did male stuff before. I started watching them when the Diva comic came out >>298883 Why does the red head have KSI's hairline? One of her tits is also bigger than the other and her nose is literally on her cheek (when on the panel to the right the other girl has her head tilted at the same angle, but her nose is actually where it should be).

>>298887 It’s a good thing anon doesn’t have his own comic because the art would be so good and proportionate that we’d cum ourselves to death

>>298891 At least I wouldnt make them look like megamind and milk the comics as much as possible.

>>298896 To bef fair, being a supplier takes a lot of effort rather than just being a consumer, the thing is that it is obvious that SDC is not putting in the effort anyways

>>298910 Bro tried to defend SDC but changed his mind in the end lmao

>>298730 Speak of the fuckin' devil. >>298883

It's so funny how even though she is a native speaker SDC still can't fucking spell. Shows how retarded people are, I guess. Then again, seeing the type of stuff she writes, I wouldn't really doubt SDC being just a bit dim (or being really skilled at writing characters who appear to be genuinely retarded).

>>299024 >>299023 Aint now way

>>299219 I dont get it. Is the succubus making her see an illusion thats shes thin, but shes actually getting fatter? It feels like that isnt the case because in previous pages she sees she got fatter like when she lifts her shirt up and sees her belly or when tries to put on her skirt, but cant because her ass got bigger. She also literally says "sometimes I look huge, but other times I look really good" confirming that she knows shes fatter.

>>299219 Also what lazy fucking paneling. Nothing in the background and the panels are just a front and back shot of her walking... Show her rubbing sunscreen on herself, chugging pints of ice cream, winning an eating competition...SOMETHING

can people link his stuff that has burping? I know there's not much but it's a shame he doesn't do it more

I mainly use these boards for SweetDream and Belt-Buster, and it's pretty funny to see sweetdream fans complain that she goes too fast, and should slow down for more detailed pages... Meanwhile Belt-Buster fans complain he is going too slow and should hurry up and just make the girls fatter with less "extra details". What do these artists not get? Just put out 27 new and original and detailed and unique and story drive and fetish driven pages every day for me to pirate without paying! It's not that hard!

Cordelia from Fire Emblem

>>299407 Finally something good

>>299407 Sweaty out of shape girls that get exhausted after even basic tasks is peak content!

Great one! I love those from Fire Emblem games. Cordelia has to talk on this topic some time

>>299515 Wise and true words. I love fatties struggling... and I love them being lazy too. In their natural habitat.

>>299610 Half the page is wasted with useless panels and like the previous page its just two back shots of her walking. Also the comic still doesnt explain how the succubuses powers work. Does the spell make her and the people around her create an illusion that shes thin because her friend in the third page didnt say anything, but then at the beach people can see her belly? She says shes put on weight, but the illusion shows she looks the exact same like she did at the start.

>>298733 this mf really thought that because he knows how to use MsPaint he is all of a sudden. master comic connoisseur. Like 80 percent of these "markups" are just you trying to sound smart.

>>299610 I don't even care about the art quality here atp, because genuinely what the fuck is even going on here? What does the purple effect even do? She notices she is stuck in the door, but she is somehow still convinced she is skinny? What?

The purple effect is more for the reader. I think its showing us that feeder demon is using thier magic on the sign to fool her into thinking shes going to a gym when in reality shes going to a buffet. I can assume the next page will be her in an illusion of her working out when in reality shes glutting her face. Idk how it rationalizes how she got stuck though? Maybe in her head the gym door is jammed?

>>299709 Well, she might feel it, but she isn't sure of it. That's probably why she feels so focused on losing weight even though in her eyes she looks skinny, but she doesn't feel skinny. You could go full illusion of anorexia, but that's fucked up to a degree. Point is, she probably feels fat, sees that she isn't fat, still is very much fat in reality

>>299715 ok, you don't understand how illusions function, you explained how it fails not how it works. It's not being delusional, it's literally false reality stuff

>>299715 Like for example, next page most likely or close by, we will see her "working out" and say, as she picks up a dumbbell and lifts it she might think, she's lifting weights but in reality, she's just grabbing a drumstick and taking a bite out of it as grease goes down from her mouth, hell she might even think the grease is sweat for that matter. Another example is her thinking that she's doing runs on the treadmill, feeling like she's doing barely any running, feeling slow and sluggish. In reality, she's just in the waiting line for serving trays and plates, maybe thinking that her "protein powder" drink is helping her build muscle but it's just a milkshake and it's all adding to her flabby waist

>>299725 Completely fair, SDC is just bad at portraying that because she's used to writing delusional characters and got the concept mixed as well

>>299736 I'm still so sad we're not getting "Every last bite" soon. How Alex and Gina are starting to become truely immobile, just at the very edge of being bed bound. How Christina, Hana and Liz are starting to get too big to do anything whilst waddling ever so slowly more often. But instead we have a comic with good art but slow development and a comic with a lot of issues from mistakes in the setting. At least the feeder maid short comic was pretty good though.

>>299738 This was still the most mid of all the comics she's done. I'll take Pervy Cheerleader 2 over that any day

>>300133 It's not that SDC draws badly, but she's drawing this comic too quickly, or maybe she changed her mind about the idea and that's why it's so rough. She prefers to continue it rather than cancel it. If I were SDC, I'd make a comic about Hana's weight gain and how she met her boyfriend; it's such a good idea that the artwork would be really good.

>>300139 Honestly, i think she just thinks this comic sucks too but wants it done so instead of wasting time on this she just wants it complete so she can just go full time on doughnation dependency, it's becoming clear to her that this double comic format isn't working

>>300158 Honestly, I feel that it makes more sense to dedicate more slots to the slow-burn stories compared to the short ones, so that the long-term stories get to develop at a faster pace story-wise while the short-term stories don't get rushed.

>>300178 >>300158 >>300139 There is definetly a feeling of this comic being rushed with how bad the panels and dialogue is. Only problem with SDC focusing just on the slower paced comic is that no one would read it except that small group of people who like nothing, but filler so SDC is trying to keep both types of audiences, but it clearly isnt working.

Tried rewriting some of the dialogue for it to make more sense and also filled out the white areas like near the neck of the waitress and the food trays.

>>300181 I do see a future of her just doing: 1. The main big current comic 2. Smaller art pieces in her artstyle with a high to medium quality shading

Judging by SDC's monthly announcement, I don't think she will stop producing two comic book series at the same time. "I've had a lot of fun doing the short run quick gain comics, and experimenting with different types of stories, or sometimes very basic ones was nice to try out. What comics did you like the most and why? Is there a character or scene that stood out to you? Did you like the short form like the Maid Comic, and The gluttony Demon? The more Medium story focused of the Taster? Or the more gaining focused less story of Skip days? Or is Doughnation with it's long build and stronger character focus/ social focus gaining what makes you most excited? I will be taking all feedback into my next comic. I've got the plot started by how it goes and the details it gets will take your answers into account."

>>300298 >>300309 I don't get how braindead SDC has to be to not just do one comic series at a time. Every other artist I follow does just one series with an occasional sequence on the side as a way to take a break from the comic. its impossible to work on two series at the same time without one or the other suffering either in quality or writing and we can clearly see that and SDC knows that too, but for some reason still keeps doing it. Not only would doing just one series make it be released quicker, but also the artist would be 100% focused on it instead of 50/50.

>>300309 at least she's willing to accept critique. doesn't sound too bad to me.

>>300386 It just sounds like an empty promise to me. A lot of artists say things like that, but then end up thinking there the only ones who are right and if they dont like them they can find someone else.

>>300398 I dont get it.