Here's a big rant about the first comic "Fat Chance".
Viki get's put on a diet by her Mom on page 1 and it seems obvious that she's going to rebel against her, I wonder if there's going to be an addictive fast food place or maybe a special burger challenge in this comic.
On page 10 Eda suggests a challenge for the Mega Burgers launch, Mega steals this idea and says it on the podcast on page 23, an insanely long time for a set up, I wonder how much longer this will be dragged out.
Mega reveals how addicting the food is, which was previously set up, she says people who eat at her restaurant "never stop chewing even when their jaws hurt and they never stop consuming."
We get 4 panels of the red head customer in the first 23 pages, who is used as an example of a customer who is "losing control", and we get a handful of belly shots of Cassie eating, at this point it seems like the ground work is there for the stuffing and gaining to happen right?
Fast forward to page FORTY FIVE and finally Viki is doing the challenge teased 35 pages earlier and then Viki doesn't even finish the 3rd burger. This is 9 full months after page 1 was released, for anyone reading week to week.
Dana completes the 3 Mega burger challenge on a single page, after FORTY NINE pages of setting this up. Almost a full year after page 1 of the comic was released.
I get that CoolViki sets up multiple plots across these pages but it's basically a comic with some fat stuff rather than being a fetish comic, there's so much set up and fluff and then Dana relapsing and eating the burgers is one page, where we don't even see her eat anything.