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Inflation Writing/Stories Thread 2: READ NIGGA READ Edition Anonymous
No. 136109
Last Thread: https://bbw-chan.link/inf/res/27060.html Alright, after 3 years, the writing thread finally got bumplocked, so you know what that means: NEW THREAD BABEY Rules are simple, post any stories related to inflation, blueberry, full body, hourglass, etc. Feel free to shill your own stories if you wanna, idgaf, just don't spam

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The Office Disaster Part 1: The Secret Diet A young woman named Carolina worked in a downtown accounting office. She was known for her efficiency, her kindness, and, most recently, for her... sudden and exaggerated weight gain. Her once slender body had transformed into a figure of colossal proportions. Her hips were so massive that her business skirts struggled to contain them, her stomach was a taut sphere, and her breasts, once modest, were now a towering mass that threatened to burst through her shirt buttons. The cause of this change was a new "growth pill" diet. A new miracle product she had found in an internet advertisement. It was supposed to make her "bigger in every way," giving her confidence and a more commanding presence at work. Naively, she had believed this referred to her intellect, not her body. And the side effect—an insatiable hunger and a tendency to burp—was something she struggled to control. That morning, Carolina had woken up feeling bigger than ever. Her once-well-fitting business suit was now a battlefield. Her skirt had ripped in the back, her shirt wouldn't close, and her pants had given way to her massive hips. Carolina: (In a panicked voice, on a phone call with her friend) "Julia! I don't know what's happening! Every time I take one of those pills, my body... my body expands! I can't... I can't fit into my clothes! And my stomach keeps... BUURRPPP!... making noises!" A loud burp escaped her lips, causing Julia on the other end of the line to fall silent. Carolina: (Her face red with embarrassment) "Julia, I'm really sorry! I just can't control it!" And my boss... my boss is going to see me! He's going to realize that... that I'm a... MHMMPMPMPMHHMMM!... fat girl! Julia, however, was worried. Carolina's growth didn't seem to stop, and her friend was becoming a gigantic figure. Julia: (In a panicked voice) "Carolina, you have to stop eating those pills! You're... Gaaah!... you're swelling up like a balloon! And your voice... your voice is getting deeper and deeper!" But Carolina, in her naiveté and her desperation to fit in, had become addicted to the pills. The feeling of being "big" was intoxicating, even though body shame tormented her. Part 2: The Hallway Disaster That morning, Carolina, wearing a torn business suit and her immensely swollen body, tried to get to her office. Every step was an effort. Her immense hips rubbed against each other, her thighs rubbed together, and her belly hung over the waistband of her skirt. The office hallways, once wide, now seemed narrow. Carolina: (To herself, panting) "I'm almost... almost there! If I can just sit at my desk, no one will see me! And then... then I can... Nwooo! UUGHHH...!... take another pill!" A panicked, immensely loud burp escaped her mouth, causing the ceiling lights to vibrate. Her belly swelled slightly further, creating a painful pressure. Her skirt, already ripped, split in two, and her pants fell open. Carolina: (With a strangled gasp) "Oh, no! My clothes! And my... my butt! It feels... it feels huge!" She tried to maintain her balance, but her vast body betrayed her. Her enormous thighs wobbled, her immense hips collided, and with a cry of despair, she fell sideways, her colossal body impacting the floor with a loud crash. Carolina: (In a horrified voice, her body trembling) "STOP! Don't look at me! I'm... I'm a... a fat girl! I'm... I'm stuck!" People came out of their offices, staring with a mixture of astonishment and disgust. The scene was grotesque. Carolina's body, immense and round, took up almost the entire width of the hallway. Her swollen belly hung over her hips, and her gigantic breasts spilled over her shirt. Carolina: (Her face red with embarrassment, her vast body shaking with despair) "No! Don't look at me! I'm really sorry! I just can't... Ooooh... I... oooooffff...!... get up!" A spasm shook her, and a loud burp left her mouth, a sound of pure force that made the office walls shake. Carolina's body swelled slightly more, and the seams of her shirt completely disintegrated. Carolina: (Screaming in panic) "The burp... the burp is making me bigger! I can't stop! My body... my body is a... a balloon!" Part 3: The Explosive Ending Carolina's growth didn't stop. The burp became a constant, a loud roar that echoed throughout the office. Her already gigantic body was expanding endlessly. The hallway became smaller, and the office walls began to collapse. crack. People ran, panicking, but Carolina, in her ecstasy and desperation, didn't notice them. Carolina: (With a broken, tearful voice) "Julia! Julia! Don't look at me! I don't want you to see... to see this! My body... my body is going to... Uhghhghhghhhhh...!... explode!" Carolina's belch was a prolonged, agonizing bellow, a mixture of terror and madness. Her skin, which had stretched beyond belief, began to crack. Her belly, already a gigantic sphere, swelled even further. Her face contorted in a final scream of terror. Carolina: (With hysterical laughter and a final scream of pain) "I don't want to... HICK...!... explode! I want to be... Aahhaaahahaa!... the biggest!" With a KABOOOOOOOM! With a thunderous crash, Carolina's body exploded in a cloud of sticky dust and a trail of final humiliation. In its place was a smoking crater in the hallway and a mess of sticky goo on the floor. The office fell silent. The "growth pill diet" had done its work. It had turned an office girl into a sticky, exploding mess.

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The Violet Transformation Part 1: The Mysterious Cake Valentina was a free-spirited young woman with an infectious laugh, with long, distinctive purple hair that reflected her vibrant personality. Unlike other girls, she always embraced the unusual and the magical. One night, at a college party, a friend offered her a slice of a cake that she claimed was "a new kind of blueberry." Valentina, always willing to try new things, gladly accepted. The cake was delicious, but after a few minutes, Valentina felt a strange bubbling in her stomach and a bloated feeling that wasn't just from overeating. She looked down at her hands and arms, which seemed bigger. Her belly, already prominent, swelled like a balloon, straining her T-shirt and pants to the limit. Valentina: (With a mixture of panic and astonishment, on a phone call with her friend) "Sofia! I don't know what's going on!" I ate the cake and my belly... my belly is... MHMMPMPMPMHHMMM!...! Growing! I can barely breathe! A loud, immensely powerful burp escaped her lips, and her cheeks turned red with embarrassment. The people around her stared at her with a mixture of curiosity and amazement. Valentina: (Voice shaking, almost sobbing) "Sofia, I'm really sorry! I just can't... Nwooo! UUGHHH!... control it! Every time I... Gaaah!... burp, I get bigger!" Valentina's friend, a slender blonde, remained silent on the other end of the phone. In the background of the party, a blonde in a red dress and a brunette in a pink dress watched the protagonist, a blonde-haired woman, in a similar state, her round, blueish body, like a giant blueberry. The scene was chaotic, and Valentina felt trapped in a mess she didn't understand. Valentina: (With a groan of despair, holding her colossal abdomen with both hands) "Oh, no! I'm still growing! I don't fit on the couch anymore! I'm... MPAMFPSDFMPS!... too big for the party!" Part 2: The Mountain Giantess Valentina's growth didn't stop. Her body swelled at an alarming rate, and each spasm in her abdomen caused her body to expand further. Her terrified friends left her alone in the party room, which was now a prison. The house, which had once seemed large, became smaller around her. Valentina: (Screaming, her voice rattling the furniture) "Sofia, I'm stuck! My head is... Uhghhghhghhhhh...! touching the ceiling! And my butt... my butt is bursting through the couch!" I need... I need... BUURRPPP!.... a bigger place! Another spasm shook her, and a monumental belch escaped her mouth, a sound of sheer force that caused the house's windows to shatter. The house couldn't bear the pressure any longer. The roof, the walls, everything split, cracked, and crumbled around her. Valentina found herself outdoors, sitting on the rubble of what had been her friend's house. Her dress was gone, and her body was a gigantic mass of flesh, her hips and belly of epic proportions. She sat on what had been a small cottage, her immense buttocks crunching the foundation, feeling the earth tremble beneath her weight. The moon shone in the sky, and the night landscape was a canvas at her feet. She felt incredibly small, despite her size. Valentina: (In a voice that sounded like thunder from miles away) "Sofia, ... Mmmmm Bwwuuaarrpp... urp... ughhh...!... I can't... I can't stop! The burp won't stop and... and I keep growing!" Sofia's laughter on the phone turned into a series of panicked sobs. Valentina was alone, a giant in the middle of the forest, with the moon as the only witness to her transformation. Her body continued to grow, and the feeling of fullness turned into one of immense pressure. Valentina: (With a groan, holding her belly with both hands) "Oh my God! What did I do! This... Ooooh... I... oooooffff...!... is the worst moment of my life!" Part 3: The Violet Sphere The night wore on, and Valentina's growth became more and more intense. The feeling of pressure on her body was overwhelming, and with each burp, her body rounded even more. Her arms and legs grew shorter, and her torso expanded into a near-perfect sphere. The world grew smaller around her. Valentina, the giant who had once sat in her house, was now a colossal sphere floating in the air. Her pajama pants and T-shirt were no more, only a couple of shreds of fabric that barely covered her shoulders. Gravity seemed to have no effect on her, and her spherical body remained in the sky, like a new moon. She looked down at her hands, which were now the size of trees. She looked down at herself, a round, gigantic body, with her small face at the center. She no longer felt fear. but a strange sense of peace. She no longer apologized for the belches, which were now a sound of pure power, a bellow that echoed through the valley. Valentina: (In a voice that sounded like distant thunder, speaking to herself) "I guess this is what 'fullness' means. It's... it's crazy! But... huuurkkk!... I feel... I feel so happy!" A final spasm shook her, and the belch was the biggest of all. The sound was so powerful that the mountains shook, and the trees fell to the ground. Valentina, now a giant, perfect sphere, let out one last moan of satisfaction. Her eyes, once filled with panic, now held a look of acceptance. She had become a delicious mess, a flesh moon in the night sky. Valentina: (In a whisper that seemed to whisper throughout the valley) "Oh, God!" I guess... HICK...!... the cake worked! AHHAHHAAHAA!
>>150375 >>150380 >>150381 Ok, so the main problem with all of these is that you write like it's stage direction. don't do that. that's not how most writers write. if you want to get across how a character feels, or looks, or what they do, you can do that with actual descriptive language. show, don't tell, is the fundamental part of creative writing. It just feels like your stories are telling us what's happening, not actually showing it.

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The Purple Fury Part 1: The Night of Infinite Happiness Sandra was a woman with a kind heart and a figure that was already of considerable proportions, but she loved life, especially summer festivals. Her hair was long and blonde, and her eyes shone with contagious joy. That night, at a beach festival, she was wearing a T-shirt that barely contained her vast bust and shorts that disappeared below her immense hips. She was holding a handful of balloons, and her smile was as big as her belly. She was walking along the beach, laughing and chatting with her boyfriend, Leo, a boy with brown hair and kind eyes who looked at her with genuine adoration. Leo: (With a smile on his face) "Look, Sandra! That food stand! They say they have 'the snack of infinite happiness'!" Sandra: (With a laugh that made her body tremble) "Oh, Leo, how silly you are! Infinite happiness can't be bought at a food stand! But it sure sounds delicious!" A mysterious-looking old vendor, wearing a straw hat and an enigmatic smile, offered them a sample. It was a small, shiny purple ball with an intoxicating aroma. Vendor: (In a raspy voice) "Try it, girl. It promises infinite happiness. And it's free." Sandra, always trusting, ate it in one bite. It was the most delicious flavor she had ever tasted, and a wave of warmth and joy spread through her body. She felt incredible, as if she were floating. Her already large body began to expand. Her vast hips widened a little more, her belly became a little rounder. But, to her surprise, she didn't feel fear, but immense happiness, hence her smile. Sandra: (With a laugh that echoed throughout the festival, her voice filled with joy) "Leo! How... how incredible! I feel so good! And I feel like I'm... BUURRPPP!... growing! But I don't mind! How happy I am!" Sandra's burp was loud, but she wasn't embarrassed. Her body continued to grow, her balloons popped, and her figure became even more imposing in the crowd. Her blonde hair slowly turned a shade of purple, as if reacting to the candy's energy. Leo: (With a mixture of amazement and concern) "Sandra! Your hair! And your body! It's... MHMMPMPMPMHHMMM!... inflating! Are you okay?" Sandra: (With a laugh of pure joy) "I've never felt better, Leo! I feel so... so huge! Aahhaaahahaa!" Part 2: The Purple Giantess The candy's endless happiness turned into endless growth. Sandra, already large, became a giant. The festival below her looked like a diorama. Her legs, thighs, and hips became colossal masses, and her belly was a gigantic sphere. People ran around in panic, but she, in her ecstasy, didn't notice them. Sandra: (Screaming with joy, her voice echoing across the beach) "Look, Leo! I'm... MPAMFPSDFMPS!... a giant! The world is so small! Isn't it incredible!" Her body continued to expand, the feeling of happiness grew more intense, and her body grew larger. The sun was setting, and the sky turned a shade of purple, reflecting her new hair color. Her body continued to expand, her belly and hips were of a magnitude that made buildings look like toys. Leo: (In a panicked voice, on the phone) "Sandra! Your house! You're... you're sitting on it! You're crushing the roof!" Sandra looked down and saw herself sitting on a small cottage, which looked like a doll beneath her vast frame. Her purple hair moved in the breeze, and her immense hips and thighs spilled over the walls. But the ecstasy of the sweet treat still kept her in a state of euphoria. Sandra: (Laughing, in a voice like thunder) "Oh, God! I'm sorry! I didn't see it! But... Ooooh... I... oooooffff...!... it's fun! Look at me, Leo! I'm the queen of the world!" Part 3: The Explosive Ending But the "infinite happiness" came at a price. As her body grew, the internal pressure increased. The ecstasy faded, replaced by excruciating pain. Her body, which had become a sphere, looked like a purple moon in the night sky. Her arms and legs had retracted, and her body was a mass of flesh that was endlessly expanding. Sandra: (Screaming in panic and pain, her voice a bellow of despair) "Leo! This isn't happiness! It's... it's pain! I feel like I'm going to... Uhghhghhghhhhh...!... explode! I can't... I can't stop!" Sandra's burp was the loudest of all, a sound of sheer force that shook the earth. The sky clouded over, and the pressure on her body became overwhelming. Tears spilled from her eyes, and her body turned a darker shade of purple. Sandra: (Voice breaking, almost sobbing) "Leo! I love you! I'm really sorry!" Please... huuurkkk!... forgive me! For being so... Nwooo! UUGHHH...!... stupid! Sandra's final belch was a prolonged, agonizing bellow, a mixture of terror and madness. Her skin, which had been stretched beyond belief, began to crack. Sandra: (With hysterical laughter and a final scream of pain) "I don't want... HIC...!... for it to be the end! I want... Aahhaaahahaa!... more happiness!" With a thunderous KABOOOOOOOM!, Sandra's body exploded in a cloud of purple dust and a shower of glitter. Her laughter and scream of terror mingled into a final sound that echoed across the beach. The crater it left behind was a reminder that endless happiness sometimes comes at a price, and in Sandra's case, it was an explosive one.
>>150387 If I can be completely honest here: 1. Using AI as a thumbnail is kinda cringe. I know it's the writing that matters, but AI images always leave a bad taste in my mouth. They also say a lot about the poster as well. 2. You need to be more descriptive if you want to write something good. Your stuff is way too short and it really falls flat as a result. I also agree with the other guy, show, don't tell is a very valuable skill in many regards. 3. This one is a personal nitpick, but you don't suppose you can post it to like DA or smthn and then post the link here? I get that this is the writing thread, but it really sucks to look for things with super large walls of text flooding the page.
>>150387 >Sandra: (With a laugh that made her body tremble) "Oh, Leo, how silly you are! Infinite happiness can't be bought at a food stand! But it sure sounds delicious!" Why is the dialogue written like it was copypasted from a chatroom? I can't beat my meat to this shit.
Almost done with the latest chapter of my story. Thought it wouldn't hurt to run it by y'all one more time. Does it suck? Let me know why! I always appreciate any critical feedback! https://www.deviantart.com/stash/016ixnkt4srb
>>150389 brother i think the entire text is Ai, not just the thumbnails lol get this shit out of the thread
>>150409 >i think the entire text is Ai I wouldn't be surprised if that were the case. But, it's just dawned onto me that he could've saved a ton of post space by posting all of his shit as .txt files or, hell, a single .txt file. I've been using Wordpad to save my stuff as plain text documents and it only takes a couple clicks, as well as some reformatting after saving.
https://www.deviantart.com/nounotme/art/Vili-vs-The-Factory-Part-2-Egress-1226451282 It's out. Tell me what y'all think of it
https://www.deviantart.com/malevolentmaeve/art/First-Times-1148559356 https://www.deviantart.com/ceoofinflation/art/Overblown-Goddess-of-Light-Paluoontena-1031509895 https://www.deviantart.com/lillyjadekatrin/art/Mini-Floating-Along-1221376336
Does anyone have good stories where a slime girl or sentient slime forces themself inside an unwilling victim? I find stories like these very hard to come by.
https://www.deviantart.com/drinkapus/art/Guild-of-Balloonsmiths-1232458056 https://www.deviantart.com/ceoofinflation/art/Overblown-Goddess-of-Light-Paluoontena-1031509895 https://www.deviantart.com/ceoofinflation/art/Kneesocks-Unholy-Blowout-1218146445
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>>151171 Only good one I can think of from the top of my head. Has a sequel too. https://www.deviantart.com/plasticextreme/art/The-Slime-Invasion-836983582

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Any recommendations for writers or stories with good, detailed transformation descriptions? Even before ai, a lot of them had kinda stale patterns/tropes; 'she looked like she was 9 months pregnant with triplets' and size comparisons to different kinds of balls, stuff like that. My only stipulation besides the obvious good writing/spelling/punctuation/etc is no fanfic stuff besides wonka. Even that can be distracting sometimes.
https://www.deviantart.com/jeeperycreep/art/COMM-Overfilled-Party-Favors-Uber-Inflation-997764572 https://www.deviantart.com/eyebeast/art/Patreon-Prompt-924-1242352766 https://www.deviantart.com/jbonly/art/Tutelage-1101260643
wrote a persona 5 weight gain story that deviantart removed so its on ao3 instead, all feedback welcome https://archiveofourown.org/works/73462721
https://www.deviantart.com/bruhfunny1234/art/Blueberry-Dreemurr-Delight-BB-sex-1215390645 BB story i wrote for juicy july. 8k words of sans fuckin the hell out of a big juicy toriel
Has anyone had luck using AI software to re-write inflation stories? I see a lot of nice full-body inflation stories out on DA, but I only like breast inflation. Been experimenting with free websites but they usually restrict either the 18+ subject matter, word count, or sometimes both. Any help would be appreciated.
Wrote another thingy. Certainly a deviation from the norm, but you be the judge on how good it is. I certainly put a lot of effort into it, that's for sure. https://www.deviantart.com/nounotme/art/Vili-vs-The-Factory-Pt-3-Perception-1260181263
The invitation came in a gold envelope that smelled faintly of hops and cocoa butter. Madison Beer thought it was a brand deal. She posted a mirror selfie holding the envelope to her chest (cleavage on full display, caption: “someone wants to put me in chocolate? name a better collab”). Twenty-four hours later a matte-black Rolls was waiting outside her house. She wore a tiny white crop top that barely contained her already-legendary assets, low-rise leather pants, and a smug little smile. Famous last smile. The factory doors sealed behind her with a sound like a bank vault. Miss Wonka waited beneath a single red spotlight, top hat tilted, violet velvet coat brushing the floor. “Madison Beer,” she said, tasting the name like fine wine. “Today we bottle perfection.” Madison rolled her eyes. “Cute. Where’s the contract and the ring light?” There was no contract. The Oompa-Loompas came out of the dark like a silent tide. Ten of them. Twenty. They moved too fast for screaming. Titanium cuffs snapped around her wrists and ankles. A collar locked her neck back at a cruel angle, mouth forced open by a cold steel ring gag. Her phone clattered to the floor and shattered. She found her voice then. “GET YOUR FUCKING HANDS OFF ME! DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM? I’LL HAVE YOU ALL ARRESTED—” The keg descended. Two hundred and fifty tons. Eighty feet tall. Five hundred and twenty thousand gallons of 10% imperial stout, specially brewed to be thick, creamy, and absolutely unforgiving. The word BEER was carved across it in letters of molten gold. Two hoses dropped from the ceiling on articulated arms. One matte black. One surgical steel. Both thicker than her forearm. The black hose took her mouth first. It punched past the gag, seated itself deep in her throat, and sealed with a hydraulic hiss. Madison’s eyes went saucer-wide. She tried to bite down (couldn’t). Tried to scream (only gurgled). The steel hose found her from behind. Leather pants shredded like tissue. Cold metal pressed, pushed, and forced its way inside with a wet, invasive pop that made her entire body seize. Both pumps engaged at once. The surge was apocalyptic. Beer exploded into her mouth and her ass simultaneously (two firehoses meeting in the middle of her body). She felt it collide inside her stomach like twin tidal waves. Her eyes rolled back. Her brain shorted out into pure, animal panic. I’m going to die. This is how I die. They’re drowning me in beer from both ends. Her belly detonated outward first, skin stretching glossy and drum-tight. But the real horror started in her chest. Madison had always been famous for her breasts (natural, gravity-defying, the kind that broke the internet in a bikini). Now they betrayed her completely. The stout found them like heat-seeking missiles. She felt the pressure build under each implant-free orb (felt the skin pull, felt the weight triple, quadruple, tenfold). Her crop top disintegrated in one violent rip. The bra beneath never stood a chance. Her breasts surged forward and outward into two perfect, independent spheres, growing faster than the rest of her. Fifty gallons. Five hundred. A thousand. They rounded, lifted, then sagged heavily with liquid weight until they were each the size of weather balloons, then medicine balls, then compact cars (shiny, bronze, veined faintly with blue beneath the surface, sloshing with every heartbeat). Her nipples (once dainty pink) darkened and widened, stretched to the size of saucers, leaking tiny rivulets of foam that ran down the curves like condensation on a cold pint glass. The rest of her body followed the same merciless logic. Torso, hips, back (everything rounded into one colossal central sphere). Her shoulders vanished into the curve. Her arms were swallowed until only her delicate hands remained, poking out near the equator like tragic little decorations. Her legs disappeared entirely except for her small bare feet, toes still painted the same soft pink they’d been this morning. Ninety feet. Ninety-five. Ninety-eight feet in diameter for the central body orb. And her breasts (God, her breasts) each now thirty-six feet across, two bronze planets of carbonated stout jutting from the front of the main sphere like obscene, overfilled water balloons. They touched the floor first, spreading slightly under their own weight, sloshing in slow, nauseating waves. The pumps finally died. The hoses detached with long, wet sucking sounds. Beer poured from her mouth, her ass, and now from both swollen nipples in thick, creamy streams before internal valves sealed everything shut with soft, final clicks. Silence. She was a monument. One central sphere (ninety-eight feet across) resting heavily on the reinforced platform. Two smaller but still enormous breast-spheres (thirty-six feet each) protruding from the front, so full they quivered with every breath. Only her normal-sized head sat atop the central orb, hair matted with stout and tears. Only her trembling hands and tiny feet stuck out (four pathetic reminders that a girl was still trapped inside all that beer). The sloshing was everywhere. Inside her belly. Inside each monumental breast. A constant, low, oceanic roar. She tried to speak. It came out a slurred, broken hiccup. “hhhh… hlp…” A belch rolled out of her (twenty full seconds of deep, frothy bass) and foam rained down over her face and the curves of her breasts. Her mind was gone. The alcohol was absolute. Her blood was 80-proof now. Thoughts came slow and sticky. so full… so drunk… can’t think… everything spins… tastes like beer… smells like beer… i am beer… She cried (messy, snotty, uncontrollable). “mommy… i want my mom… please… i’m scared…” Another belch. Her whole body wobbled (central sphere and breast-spheres all sloshing in different rhythms). “my boobs… they’re… they’re huge… they hurt so much… they’re full of beer… everything’s full of beer…” She tried to bring one hand to her face. She realized quickly all her hand could do was flap pathetically countless feet away on the other side of her enormous beer filled rounded body. “i can’t move… i’m never moving again… this is forever…” Her voice cracked into high, drunken sobs that made the breast-spheres jiggle grotesquely. “somebody find me… tell my family i love them… tell them i’m sorry… i didn’t mean to be a bitch… i just wanted to be pretty…” She hiccuped constantly now, tiny wet sounds between words. “i’m literally Madison Beer… that’s the joke… that’s all i am now… a giant drunk keg with tits…” A fresh wave of tears. “i’m only twenty-three… i had tours… i had albums… i had a life…” Her head lolled forward. Drool and stout dripped from her bottom lip onto the upper curve of her left breast-sphere. “so drunk… can’t stay awake… everything’s warm and thick and spinning…” She managed one last coherent sentence, small and cracked and utterly broken. “please don’t leave me like this… i’m still in here… i’m still Madison… i’m still a person…” Then the alcohol took over completely. Her eyes unfocused. Her hands opened and closed weakly against the taut skin of her central orb. Her feet twitched once and went still. Between endless hiccups and slow, frothy belches that echoed through the cathedral like distant thunder, the only sound left was the gentle, ceaseless glug-glug-glug of five hundred and twenty thousand gallons shifting inside the girl who used to be Madison Beer (now nothing but the world’s largest, most expensive, permanently intoxicated serving of herself). In the dark, Miss Wonka raised a crystal stein in salute. “To vintage 2025,” she whispered. “Never to be poured out. Never to be emptied. Never to be free.” And somewhere deep inside the bronze, sloshing monument, Madison hiccuped one final, devastated sound that wasn’t quite a word anymore. Then even that stopped.
The Golden Ticket Mishap In the bustling heart of Tokyo, 20-year-old Aiko Tanaka was a rising star in the ASMR community. With her soft, whispering voice that could send shivers down spines through hours of gentle roleplays and trigger sounds, she had amassed a modest but devoted following on streaming platforms. At 5 feet 4 inches (162 cm) tall, Aiko had a lithe, athletic build honed from weekend hikes in the mountains—slender limbs, a narrow waist measuring 24 inches (61 cm), modest B-cup breasts, and long, silky black hair that cascaded down to her mid-back like a raven waterfall. Her almond-shaped eyes, framed by subtle eyeliner, sparkled with quiet intensity, and her skin was a warm porcelain glow. She dreamed of blending her ASMR talents with international collabs, but life took a whimsical turn when she unwrapped a Wonka chocolate bar smuggled into Japan via a fan's care package. Nestled inside was a gleaming golden ticket, an invitation to Ms. Wonka's legendary factory tour in England. "Watashi no yume ga kanau!" she whispered to her webcam in her signature ASMR hush (My dream is coming true!), her limited English barely sufficient for the excited email she sent to claim her spot. The factory loomed like a confectionary cathedral on the outskirts of a rainy English village, its striped spires piercing the gray December sky. Aiko arrived jet-lagged but buzzing, her simple white blouse and knee-length pleated skirt a stark contrast to the eccentric tour group assembled in the foyer—all women and girls, a parade of mothers and daughters in various states of wide-eyed anticipation. There was stern Mrs. Hargrove, 45, clutching her 12-year-old daughter Emily's hand; bubbly Violet Chen, 16, already popping gum and eyeing her phone; and elegant Lady Beaumont with her twin 18-year-old daughters, Clara and Fiona, all whispering about the "magical wonders" they'd read about. No boys, no fathers—just this estrogen-fueled convoy, guided by the enigmatic Ms. Wonka herself, a sharp-witted inventor in a velvet top hat and emerald tailcoat, her eyes twinkling with secrets. Leading the tour were the Wonkaettes—a troupe of pop star-like women workers, their outfits a riot of sequins and candy-striped leotards, hair teased into gravity-defying updos, and voices harmonizing in auto-tuned bursts of encouragement. They moved like a K-pop girl group on a sugar rush, twirling batons of licorice and belting out synchronized jingles: "Step right in, taste the sin, Wonka's world where dreams begin!" Aiko hung at the back, her cheeks flushing as the language barrier hit. She nodded politely to Ms. Wonka's rapid-fire English explanations, murmuring "Hai... yes, understand," but mostly tuning out, her mind drifting to potential ASMR scripts inspired by the chocolate rivers she'd glimpsed in old films. The group progressed through the Bubblegum Forest, where Violet nearly got stuck inflating like a balloon (saved by a quick Wonkaette pop-song intervention), and the Fizzy Lifting Soda chamber, where Emily accidentally floated toward the ceiling, giggling hysterically until her mother yanked her down. Aiko smiled faintly, snapping discreet photos on her phone for her followers, whispering "Subarashii... amazing" under her breath. But it was the Chocolate Room that sealed her fate—a verdant paradise of edible meadows, with a river of molten cocoa winding through fields of fizzy grass and trees heavy with caramel apples. The air hummed with sweetness, and the Wonkaettes launched into a choreographed routine, their heels clicking like castanets as they sang: "Dip your toe, let it flow, chocolate dreams in the glow!" Ms. Wonka, ever the showwoman, gestured to a crystal punch bowl brimming with experimental treats. "Ladies, a sip of this is the Everlasting Gobstopper Elixir—turns your tongue to flavors eternal! But mind the labels; one wrong nibble, and poof! Unexpected delights await." The group clustered around, mothers cautioning daughters while the Wonkaettes passed out samples on silver trays. Aiko, dazzled by a cluster of what looked like innocent strawberry bonbons—tiny, ruby-red orbs labeled "Gumball Surprise" in fine print she couldn't fully parse—popped one into her mouth without a second thought. It burst with a tangy fizz, and she beamed, whispering "Oishii desu!" (It's delicious!). But as the sweetness bloomed into a strange, throbbing warmth in her core, Ms. Wonka's eyes widened. "Oh dear—that's the Prototype Virility Vial! Meant for the Gum-Chewing Gorilla exhibit, not for—" Too late. Aiko's limited English caught only "prototype... wrong," her brow furrowing as a low rumble built in her belly. The transformation began subtly, a insidious creep that no one noticed at first amid the chatter. Aiko stood frozen by the chocolate river, her slim 5'4" frame suddenly feeling... heavier. A flush crept up her neck, her porcelain skin prickling as if a thousand tiny sparks danced beneath. "Nani... what's happening?" she murmured in halting English, her voice a breathy ASMR lilt edged with confusion. Her long black hair swayed as she shifted her weight, her black ballet flats sinking slightly into the soft, edible turf. The warmth pooled in her abdomen, a pulsating heat that made her narrow 24-inch waist twitch involuntarily. She clutched her stomach with one delicate hand, nails painted a soft pink, her other arm wrapping around her midsection. The tour group glanced over—Mrs. Hargrove huffed, "Language barrier strikes again"—but the Wonkaettes paused their dance, exchanging glossy-lipped glances. Then it accelerated. Aiko's legs buckled first, not in weakness, but in a bizarre lengthening. Her thighs, toned from hikes, began to merge seamlessly at the knees, the skin smoothing over the joints like warm taffy being pulled taut. She gasped, stumbling forward on all fours, her skirt hiking up to reveal pale thighs that thickened—not with fat, but with a dense, veined firmness. "Itai! It hurts!" she yelped, her English fracturing as Japanese spilled out: "Doko? Nande?!" (Where? Why?!). The merging climbed upward; her calves fused into her thighs, the bones dissolving into a singular, elongating pillar of flesh. Inch by inch, her lower body lost definition—her 34-inch hips widening not outward, but integrating into the growing shaft, the skin taking on a flushed, rosy hue, subtly textured with emerging veins that pulsed like rivers of heat. She was 5'6" now, her torso still humanoid but her legs a single, 2-foot-thick column rising from the ground, forcing her to "stand" awkwardly on her unchanged feet—those small, size 6 (23 cm) ballet-flatted soles, toes curling in panic against the chocolate grass. The group backed away, mothers shielding daughters' eyes as Violet whispered, "Is she... growing?" Aiko's eyes—those wide, dark orbs—dilated to saucer-size, pupils swallowing the irises in raw terror. She whipped her head side to side, long hair whipping like a black banner, her mouth agape in a silent scream that built into a guttural "Yamete! Stop it!" (Stop it!). Her hands—slender, unchanged, with those pink nails—flailed wildly, one grabbing at the hem of her blouse as if to anchor herself, the other slapping at the mutating flesh of her thighs. But the transformation was merciless. Her buttocks rounded briefly, then flattened and absorbed into the shaft, the cheeks merging into the swelling girth. Now at 7 feet tall, the pillar between her feet was 18 inches in diameter, meaty and unyielding, the skin stretching tight over a core that hardened like rising dough, veins bulging to the thickness of garden hoses. Aiko's spine arched involuntarily as her pelvis realigned, the bones grinding and reforming into a rigid, erect structure—no hips, no curve, just a straight, throbbing monolith. Upward it surged. Her abdomen, once flat and athletic, began to bloat and elongate, the navel inverting and vanishing as her internal organs reshaped into... something else. A deep, internal pressure built, like a balloon inflating from within, and Aiko retched, her free hand clawing at her blouse buttons, popping them open to reveal her modest breasts heaving with panicked breaths. "Kowai!怖い!This... no, please!" she sobbed, tears streaming down her cheeks, matting her long hair to her face. Her voice, that ASMR whisper, cracked into a raw wail, echoing off the chocolate walls. The shaft climbed past her ribcage, her 32-inch bustline expanding not in femininity, but in phallic rigidity—her torso compressing, ribs fusing into the dense, fibrous length. At 15 feet now, the emerging penis-body was 3 feet across at its base, the skin a mottled pink, warm to the touch, with a faint, musky scent cutting through the cocoa air. Her arms, still attached at what would become the mid-shaft, splayed outward like useless fins, hands flexing in futile protest—fingers splaying, then balling into fists, nails digging into the hardening flesh as if she could peel it away.
>>158708 The most grotesque shift came at her chest. Her breasts, those pert B-cups, swelled grotesquely under the onslaught of the elixir's alchemy. First, they tingled, nipples hardening to painful peaks as milk—thick, creamy, unnatural—flooded the glands. Aiko's head snapped down, eyes bulging in horror as she watched them balloon: from handfuls to cantaloupes in seconds, the skin stretching translucent, blue veins spiderwebbing across the expanding orbs. "Mune... oppai ga... ahhh!" she cried (Breasts... my breasts... ahhh!), her voice a mix of English plea and Japanese anguish. But they didn't stay there. As the shaft elongated to 25 feet, her swelling bosom migrated downward, sliding along the rigid length like weighted pendants on a pole. The nipples elongated into teats, leaking rivulets of milk that trickled down the veined surface, lubricating the transformation. Her ribcage fully integrated now, the last humanoid contour erased; what was once her waist was midway up the 4-foot-diameter trunk, arms dangling limply to the sides, hands twitching like dying spiders—fingers curling inward, thumbs jerking spasmodically as Aiko's mind reeled. Finally, the apex. Aiko's neck strained as her head—unchanged, that beautiful face framed by sweat-soaked black locks—perched atop the swelling glans. The transformation crested there: her shoulders rounded into the coronal ridge, skin flaring outward into a mushroom cap of flushed, sensitive flesh, 5 feet across at the widest. Her mouth, parted in perpetual shock, became the urethral opening, lips plumping slightly, tongue lolling as involuntary twitches made it quiver like a slit weeping pre-cum tears. At full erection—monumentally so—the structure towered at 50 feet tall, a colossal Japanese penis in every anatomical detail: shaft 45 feet long from base to tip, averaging 4.5 feet (54 inches) in diameter, veined and throbbing with a "hard" rigidity that defied gravity, standing firm and straight up like a candy-striped obelisk amid the meadow. At the base, her feet remained—those petite size 6 soles, now rooted side-by-side in the turf, toes splayed in frozen agony, ankles locked as the pillar rose unyieldingly from between them. Her hands flanked the lower shaft, palms pressed flat against the warm meat, fingers splayed outward in a gesture of eternal supplication or surrender. And the balls—oh, the balls—her breasts had descended fully, engorged to the size of hot air balloons, each a 10-foot-diameter (120 inches circumference) orb of taut, milk-swollen flesh, hanging heavy and pendulous at the base, teats dangling like udders, dribbling white streams into the chocolate soil. They swayed gently with the shaft's subtle throbs, the skin veined and hairless, a grotesque fusion of mammary and scrotal horror. Aiko's reaction was pure, unfiltered nightmare—exactly as any young woman would shatter under such violation. Her head atop the glans jerked erratically, neck craning side to side as if to deny the reality below. Eyes wild, pupils dilated to black voids engulfing her irises, she blinked in frantic Morse code: stare down at the impossible length of her body, then squeeze shut in denial, tears carving milky paths down her cheeks to drip into the slit of her mouth-urethra. "Iya! 嫌だ!This isn't me! Make it stop, onegai!" she screamed, her voice echoing hollow from the penile tip—raw, ASMR-softness twisted into guttural sobs, each word bubbling with phlegm that oozed out as viscous fluid. Her tongue lashed against her teeth, trying to form coherent pleas, but it only smeared the emerging slickness. Below, her feet stamped futilely—left sole grinding heel-to-toe into the earth, right toes flexing and curling as if to uproot the monolith, but the shaft held unyielding, quivering from the strain. Her hands, those poor unchanged sentinels, pounded against the mid-shaft—fists hammering in rhythm with her cries, nails scraping furrows in the skin that healed instantly, leaving red welts. Then, exhaustion: fingers uncurled, palms sliding down in defeated caresses, as if stroking away the curse. Her head lolled forward, hair draping over the glans like a mournful veil, eyes rolling back to whites in a faint, only to snap open again in fresh waves of revulsion. "Mama... tasukete... help..." she whimpered, the ASMR whisper returning unbidden, now a haunting, breathy dirge from the tip. The tour erupted in chaos. Mothers clutched daughters close—Mrs. Hargrove shielding Emily's face, muttering "Don't look, darling, it's a trick!"; Violet hyperventilating into her phone, live-streaming the horror; Lady Beaumont fainting into her twins' arms. Ms. Wonka pinched the bridge of her nose, sighing, "Well, that's the Virility Vial for you—meant to invigorate fruit, not... this." The Wonkaettes, unfazed professionals, snapped into a new routine: encircling the base with pom-poms, their voices rising in a bubblegum dirge laced with warnings about gluttony and mislabeled treats. "Oh, what a sticky end, for the girl who couldn't comprehend! Now she's tall and she's proud, but her screams are quite loud—Wonka's factory, where the bold get the shaft!" Aiko's towering form loomed over them all, a penile colossus in the chocolate glade, her unchanged head weeping atop the summit, hands and feet twitching in futile rebellion. The golden ticket's dream had curdled into eternal, throbbing nightmare—and in her dilated, despairing eyes, there was no whimsy left, only the raw scream of a girl forever altered.
>>156419 I re-write certain stories to tart them up or give them longevity once they stop being so effective. Only released a few as I really do not want to dishonor the original authors. I only tend to do full body, helium, popping. But I don't mind sharing a few.
heres just a bunch of stuff from dA https://mab.to/t/IUuBWCgV7I2/us2
just wrote this Chun-Li BBW gas expansion story https://www.deviantart.com/bruhfunny1234/art/Chun-Li-The-Booty-Blimp-SSBBW-WG-Gas-Bursting-1284818722
https://web.archive.org/web/20250111035119/https://archiveofourown.org/works/62029204
https://www.deviantart.com/skarmius/art/To-Ring-In-An-Amber-Era-1300031998 https://www.deviantart.com/inflationneit/art/Balloon-Day-Comm-1003788862 https://www.deviantart.com/zeedee0/art/Collab-Birthday-Blues-961321922
Heyy I'm looking for this on story "i have a blueberry for a teacher" I remember it was about a teacher explaining fetishes and blueberry inflation before she explodes
>>163459 Sounds hot. I'm looking for one called something like "Inflation Quickie" and it was a bout a girl that gets cornered in an alleyway and her attacker starts to inflate. She starts to jerk him off then leaves before he can finish. It used to be on DA, but now I cant find it.
https://www.deviantart.com/enigma-spherie/art/Vili-vs-The-Factory-Chapter-4-Prelude-1302404589 https://www.deviantart.com/enigma-spherie/art/Vili-vs-The-Factory-Chapter-5-Regression-1302454888
Any chance someone has a blueberry inflation story that was on DeviantArt years ago? The story was called 'Michelle the Blueberry' and all I remember is that the girl spontaneously swells up until she's a 20ft tall blueberry.
https://www.deviantart.com/hrpondo/art/A-Lost-Swollen-Resident-Evil-File-1304667855 Ashley and Ada Wong story
https://www.deviantart.com/enigma-spherie/gallery/96772432/vili-vs-the-factory hi, I humbly request that, whoever chooses to read this completely tear my work to shreds. I'm starting to get tired of people constantly telling me they like it. I want haters. I want to know how I can improve.
>>164583 Not exactly a hater, but there definitely needs to be more focus on the changes to Villi’s body. Maybe have her retain some juice after she juices herself, leaving her permanently bloated/thicc. Also I’m not too big of the fact that everyone around her doesn’t notice that she’s blue
>>164583 Besides it being wonkaslop and other BS (such as labelling yourself "sapphic" and begging for negative attention on BBWChan), the worst part of these stories is the mediocrity. I didn't catch any typos or grammatical buffoonery, but it was just not an interesting story at all. The story aged up factoryslop didn't do it any favors, the interactions between the guide & characters were uninteresting, and it was oddly un-erotic. There wasn't much climax or interesting description of them becoming dummy thicc, plus the safely popping left me disappointed. So iron out the character dialogue, realize you're writing erotica to induce erections on top of the story, & don't be so rough on yourself. I can DM you on there if this critique is what you were expecting or wanna talk more
https://www.deviantart.com/xthehazex/art/Allie-s-Day-Out-1328642946 Looks like XTheHazeX is back, but a handful of their older stories (and some new stuff) are now paywalled. Anyone have access to them or backups? Was looking for Cayla's Juicer in particular.
>>136109 Let's ask for stories. I'll start. Looking for stories about a peeping tom watching a girl inflate herself.
I'm looking for a specific Story that was on deviantart a year or so ago and i cannot find it anymore its name was "Kinky Jacob's Good Time", it was about a guy named Jacob who was on a date with a woman who turned out was a professional inflator and as the date went on, the woman started to inflate Jacob and tease him, she kept going until Jacob eventually popped. I tried finding it via the Wayback maschine and some Archive websites but i couldn't find it so far hope someone else has a copy or knows how to get one.
y'all will probably hate it because it isn't erotic, but here's another thingy I wrote: https://www.deviantart.com/enigma-spherie/art/Vili-vs-The-Factory-Chapter-6-Breakdown-1349093155
If anyone is interested in belly stuffing/water inflation, there’s this writer on Deviantart that has made a series on a OC where they get bigger each passing story; they are very well-detailed on the inflation/stuffing process, probably the best I’ve ever seen. Writer’s link is down below: https://www.deviantart.com/entropyconstruct
A third entry in a Samus expansion series I've been slowly writing for a while has been finished: https://www.deviantart.com/hrpondo/art/A-Lost-Swollen-Adventure-of-Samus-3-Tight-Cargo-1352849414 For those who also want to read the first two, I'll share those here as well First: https://www.deviantart.com/hrpondo/art/A-Lost-Swollen-Samus-Adventure-925640784 Second: https://www.deviantart.com/hrpondo/art/A-Lost-Swollen-Samus-Adventure-2-Vegetation-945031008
>>136109 Do we need a thread for write requests which we then deliver in >>>/elite/?
New story where a small goblin meets a slime dragon that loves to play with adventurers by filling them up: https://www.deviantart.com/hrpondo/art/A-Goblin-Meets-the-Slime-Dragon-of-Gorgemaw-Keep-1371457433 there's also an animation listed in the description
Pro tip for anyone who's trying to get into writing Format your work well I'm talking like putting spaces in between your paragraphs, maybe throw in first line indents too There is virtually no drawback to properly formatting your smut