If this thread is still active, I have two stories I wrote that I'd like to add to the mix: Not To See, But To Feel, Parts 1 and 2.
https://www.deviantart.com/thehungrylurker/art/Not-To-See-But-To-Feel-Part-1-903895728
https://www.deviantart.com/thehungrylurker/art/Not-To-See-But-To-Feel-Part-2-907165799
They're a second-person story about Cecilia Cimmerian, a blind woman who is very kind and compassionate, though rather shy, introverted, and reclusive, but has a sexual awakening when her housemate, caregiver, and only friend Nayan gives her a mysterious piece of gum that turns her into a giant, amorous, very aroused blueberry.
Part 1 is centered mostly around Cecilia's inflation. Part 2 will probably be more popular with anonettes since, though it does contain sexy moments, is mostly about character drama and development as Cecilia and Nayan talk over their feelings and work out some interpersonal drama.
The concept was inspired by Undertaker33's Factory Tour AU series featuring Lilly Satou from Katawa Shoujo, out of disappointment that the novel idea of a blind woman turning into a blueberry was delivered as just a "waifu of the week" story. My idea was to describe the blueberrification process without any explicitly visual descriptions, but entirely through what Cecilia hears, smells, tastes, and above all feels during and after her transformation (hence the title).
If you'd like me to read a story of your own, just send me a note over DA and leave a critique on either part, and I'd be happy to reciprocate with a detailed review of things I liked, disliked, and suggestions on how you can improve.
Thank you for your consideration.