Hey all, I am an amateur artist and feel I got enough weight gain pages to post this. I am not sure of the writing and pacing. These are 4 pages out of the whole.
I'm worried the information density is too much, too wordy, and there panels too small. It's 2048*2304, so it should be fine on most monitors, but each panel is winding up stuff like 479*900 which I don't know how people on mobile are seeing it, etc. Any feedback is welcome