>>296717
>but when the forearms gain not one, but two flabby rings
that might be a misunderstood detail, in the current sprite the flab on her arm is supposed to be an indentation caused by her tight sweater but I do get what you say, the first examples you used are both from commissions and in those cases I'm simply doing what I'm told, your references from softon are valuable because that's an artist I look up to
> I don't feel like there is enough time focused on Vero adapting to her new reality. Have her discover that she got new friends alongside Valeria?
this is precisely something I have planned, IDK if you've noticed but when she's in college she never goes to classes, or well, you never see her inside a classroom, my plan is to introduce more of her friends in those scenarios so new social events can be developed later like the party you see in the newest builds, and as far as adapting to her new reality is ALSO something I wanted to further explore with the classroom scenarios, like having her break chairs, feel embarrassed for showing up so fat for classes, or maybe even haver her stomach make noises in the middle of a lecture but STILL, I always welcome any constructive feedback no matter source
>>296720
the first example you used is from a very old and very rough sketch I did where I was playing with a super flabby look for her, I guess you want to see something more like that? either way your comment on her hands being too big is noted
>>296725
this, again, these are commissions and OK, clients can ask for sizes but its up to me to properly draw those parts and trust me when I say that I DO pay close attention to the way softon draws them.
that being said these are the changes I'm making to ssbbw vero based on your input, this means that I'll have to redo a lot of her sprites but I do feel these changes are necessary, I left the original bbw sketch below for reference, something I noticed is that perhaps I made her shoulder fat a bit too excessive giving her that square look, it's something I've been doing since ever and something I like to emulate from other artists but perhaps its not the right fit for this project, again, feedback IF constructive will be always heard.