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Someone posted this in the old thread, but then it got bumplocked.

>>316349 >that D.Va WEW

Previous Thread: >>313233

>>316349 Gonna be honest that Lucy sketch is probably the worst one, total waste of a spot

>>316380 Disagree; I think it's actually the cutest. D'Va would be nice if it was turned into a sequence where she's testing a new bariatric exosuit designed to keep her fed.

yep, is fighting with Compress to Impress for the title of worse comic Salt has ever produced...

And i dont get it, a fetish comic doesn't need this overly positive, acceptable message, whats the goal? Is he gonna print a physical copy and read it to kids in kindergarten? Unacceptable from concept to execution.

>>316418 Is there another page or is just that one?

>>316419 No, because he's not a drag queen.

>>316418 While I'm not one of the schizos that complain all the time I do agree that this is easily the worst of his comics so far. Since this one is both pages 14-15 it means there are only 2 pages left and even he adds there's no way to save it at this point. I'll wait until it's finished to give a full review but I really don't understand what was Salt's goal with this one. The initial setup I had in mind was "Brooke devolves further into blob mode while Olivia attempts to get her out of the gutter while getting dragged back instead" seemed interesting enough for me and was pretty easy to execute, instead we got whatever this was. It's just not really good as either a narrative or plain fetish content >>316419 The worst part is that Brooke's weight and habits were acknowledged as an actual problem brought in because of her stressful life and the desire to let go, now she's literally the same as she was at the start of the comic but... she has more stamina now? And Olivia, who had a whole comic about losing her weight and becoming a health nut, gained a bunch of weight off-screen but she didn't even care at the end? The resolution for both characters ended up being incredibly disappointing. Even if we ignore the lack of weight gain what was even the point? Either take being fat a bit more seriously and give it actual narrative weight (heh) or just make them gain until they're human blimps, this comic couldn't commit to anything

>>316422 hes just missing the wing it seems

>>316418 Skipped straight to one year later, and Olivia is just at her starting weight at Tipping the Scales. I don't know why Salt decided to make it not a single-panel page, but an immediate timeskip. I feel like an intermediary page before this one and the reconciliation could've been a montage of them working out but also pigging the fuck out together. Just feels stagnant - imagine with Brooke getting out of her moody girl rut after their conversation, she ends up getting a promotion and is able to move into them a bigger place with more space to accommodate them taking up more space, where they celebrate by feasting themselves until neither of them can move. This comic has been very boring.

>>316418 >Timeskips 8 months later, exactly the same as they were before the jump. >Two pages in one meaning we're actually getting one less page. How did he manage to make a worse comic than both Beach Stuff and Compress to Impress?

>>316418 i don't want to complain too much but, yeah. this is just...sometimes good visuals, sometimes mid.

>>316418 do the proportions feel kinda off to y'all or is it just me?

to be clear i still love Brooke with a passion that could engulf nations in fire, and i WILL be aggressively gooning to these pages for the foreseeable future regardless

>>316418 10 years ago btw:

>>316418 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9c3SHHDFkkk

>>316418 I think people here are losing sight of why Salt started his whole Feast For the Eyes project to begin with. They're supposed to be an anthology of self-contained, one-off short stories and scenarios, and that's it. Salt said he wanted to use them to "explore a variety of ideas without getting too stuck on particular storylines, and also add some more variety to my content overall." Now, whether or not those shorts have succeeded in adding more variety is another conversation, lol. >>316419 >a fetish comic doesn't need this overly positive, acceptable message Devil's advocate: why should it not? Point me to any artist as prolific as Salt who's producing fetish comics with this sort of message. I'll wait. >Is he gonna print a physical copy and read it to kids in kindergarten? If you really think people are gonna read Losing Control to elementary schoolkids when it gets a physical release later this year, then you're just not a serious person. >>316442 I don't understand why people glaze Lucy's Stuffing so much. Visually, it's incredibly boring; she's just masturbating to herself (both literally and metaphorically) in a empty void for most of it. While there's nothing inherently wrong with this, the sequence of panels where she's actually stuffing herself aren't all that interesting either (when it should be!). More eroticism is conveyed in a 3-6pg habutton short than this entire 20+ fetish comic. I can understand why Salt abandoned remastering it because had he continued with Lucy Restuffed, it probably would've looked like a complete different product had he finished.

>>316451 Shit like this is why I am happy that touch grass

>>316418 At this point he's just trolling.

>>316451 >They're supposed to be an anthology of self-contained, one-off short stories and scenarios, and that's it. Yet from that series, he's done 3 sequels and out of them, only Beach Bod Out of Season has been good. You're a fucking apologist.

>>316444 Even Beach Stuff was better than this shit icl.

>>316458 >Yet from that series, he's done 3 sequels and out of them, only Beach Bod Out of Season has been good. Couple Stuff + Beach Stuff are my overall favorites. While I liked the sizes that Selene grew to in Beach Bod and especially its sequel, one thing I can appreciate the most with any comic is: consistency in format. Some of the 'pages' in Beach Bod: Out of Season were so jank it honestly took me out of it. >You're a fucking apologist. lol. lmao, even.

>>316460 Couple Stuff kinda was the reason why I got into SSBBW’s. Such a shame Salt’s never drawn Courtney any bigger, I think she has to be blimped up more (but not obscenely like Selene or Val)

>>316451 >why should it not? Point me to any artist as prolific as Salt who's producing fetish comics with this sort of message. I'll wait. not everyone is retarded enough to go for the boring(risky) route, at this point is like Salt is making enough money to waste everyone's time by exploring concepts like those. If your on board for that, good for you, go stroke his ego a bit more. At this point i just view Salt situation like SpongeBob trying to get its driving license, he should stick to what is his strong point or if he's so eager to throw resources at half assed concepts. He should study, practice (and by practice i mean rough sketch or lineart only comics, no athlete goes through full games to train, and no artist does full on pieces to practice, my god is amount the basis of art materials), onces he has a better base in comic making, all thats left is failing faster.

>>316451 >If you really think people are gonna read Losing Control to elementary schoolkids when it gets a physical release later this year, then you're just not a serious person. that's wild you thought they were actually meaning that sincerely

>>316461 still will never understand how shes not into the fetish yet let herself get this huge

Salt’s comics have just been so boring from even a basic comic framing standpoint. Talking heads in a paint-filled box I’d be happy with unshaded art if the full page was more dynamic

>>316444 oh are we going to get a table turn where brooke gets skinny again and the other one gets fat.

>>316464 >He should study, practice [...] onces he has a better base in comic making, all thats left is failing faster. That's kinda what I was getting at being such a debbie downer in the previous thread. I'd happily resubscribe to his Patreon if he took more time between uploads and had fewer polls if that meant we could have a closer look into his art practice. I wanna see more sketches of his comics, half-rendered paintings, even screenshots of doodles on a Photoshop or CSP canvas. I'd love to see a timelapse of that Dragon Maid piece he did last month, for example. >>316466 I have been meaning to take an autism screener. >>316470 It's pretty common to stumble across women in real life who may be into certain aspects of this kink but are otherwise totally unfamiliar with FA/Feedist terminology. Although in the case of Courtney, I'm just as bewildered as you because like, IYKYK, lesbian FFAs can be pretty hardcore when it comes to stuff like that, lol.

>>316479 honestly after he had to retcon the order of some pages in Compress to Impress, he probably only has time in his busy schedule of drawing the same 5 retarded poll characters, to make the thumbnails of his comics in one swing, by the time hes putting the sauce and several things arent working together, he probably just zips it and keeps on rendering. But of course, is just a hunch

alright reading through the comic again and feel like it would just be loads better if it front loaded the emotional bits instead of the back and forth gloominess >Brooke and Olivia have their heart-to-heart and start going to the gym together >After a montage of working out (and eating out afterwards), they both realize theyve only put on weight >Finish it off with a cheesy were still friends and got each other out of a rut and now both are fatter and had an emotional arc basic story plot for any single issue comic. setup, rising action, and the resolution dont mean to complain or nag. just really like comics and feel like salt just doesnt have a firm understanding of how to make comics work as a narrative

>>316478 that'd genuinely be the worst outcome

>>316418 Okay, how the fuck is he gonna wrap this up in 2 pages?

>>316510 He should've made it the same length at his last comic, the Beach Bod sequel.

>>316510 they're gonna both hit a "healthy" middle ground where they're fat as fuck but work out and stay mobile it's not that complicated

Are people on Patreon also complaining about BWS recent work or are they just worshipping him like a god no matter what he posts? Because this issue has been happening for over a year and there hasn't been any information of BWS trying to improve

>>316518 >Are people on Patreon also complaining about BWS recent work Not in the comments. That is: rarely, if at all. >or are they just worshipping him like a god no matter what he posts? For the most part, it's this. Any criticism he's received has mostly been confined to two surveys he's offered within the past year. There was a general feedback survey in September 2025, and one focused on his OCs back in March. I was still subscribed when the general feedback survey dropped, and don't remember many people complaining about the lack of sex as much as anons do here. So take from that what you will.

>>316521 Do those on Patreon are just gay and want to see fat women be cute and wholesome instead of hot and horny

>>316522 I think the sexuality of Salt's patrons are so deeply intertwined with their fat fetishism that they're completely satisfied with him producing nothing more than softcore pornography.

>>316418 >weight gain comic >no weight gain beyond olivia's regain ...this is horrific yknow if he was gonna make a comic involving something like this he would be way better off using his other OCs who have deeper personalities. This has been so boring. It would take an absolute miracle to salvage this in 2 pages. and honestly I usually at least try to crank it to these pages but none of them have been worthwhile imo. he fucking offscreened the only weight gain happening too. genuinely baffling. my only assumptions are that he's burnt out and tired of writing stupid weight gain stories. This has simply not been a comic for real fappers (fap nation rise up). Idk how this can be seen as anything other than him trying to stretch his creative wings, and I think it's been a giant failure. I guess he doesn't HAVE to make them gain weight but the last comic in this series involved Selene becoming 1000 pounds and the last time brooke was shown she gained 500 pounds like can we be so for real. This has not been sexy and honestly??? This double spread sucks lmao Brooke's face looks so weird. This comic blows enough for me to unsub his patreon. and now we have to wait months for another comic cuz he blew his load on the shittiest fitness story ever

>>316451 >I don't understand why people glaze Lucy's Stuffing so much. Visually, it's incredibly boring; she's just masturbating to herself (both literally and metaphorically) in a empty void for most of it. Because blondes are sexy, fat blondes are sexier, women masturbating is sexy and cute, fat women masturbating and needing to get around their fat or use a toy to masturbate is even hotter, and weight gain in general is hot. Are you this devoid of taste? Also who the fuck is going to read this to elementary school kids? USAID is going to faggots, queers, and trannies whom are also pedos, not fat fetishists obsessing over BWS. You should take a break from the internet if you are this obsessed with Lucy's Stuffing to the point you talk about it like as if you are writing your master's degree thesis on it.

>>316418 I don't believe Salt knew what he wanted to do with those two. They were his least popular OCs for years, but felt the need to do something of them again to say "Yes people, they're still a thing! I haven't forgotten them!".

>>316530 My love for fat blondes getting horny and masturbating over how fat they're getting was never under dispute. What I was saying is that, in presenting Lucy's Stuffing in a comic-style format, there's very little that Salt actually did artistically to elevate what's erotic about that specific scenario (hence the comparison to habutton). It doesn't work as an erotic comic any more than some of Salt's later FFTE shorts (you can argue parts of it does, but let's be real: that's not saying much.). Overall? I think it's just fine. >Are you this devoid of taste? No, but tastes change with the benefit of hindsight. >you talk about it like as if you are writing your master's degree thesis on it. Anon if this is the first time you've given an ounce of critical thought over what makes a comic work, then maybe you're the one who should take a break from the internet.

>>316537 I love that you can see sages now.

I don’t really get what the point of these characters are anymore tbh, are they just going to be happy lardasses who work out occasionally? What’s the point in that? Much less compelling than the romantic dynamic between e.g. Halie/Nat or the Couple Stuff duo, or even roommate dynamics like Nat/Chloe. The only thing that’s kept my interest even a little bit so far is that Olivia’s fat arms are really hot.

>>316536 Being a Kate fan is rough.

>>316439 I don't like how small Brooke's legs are relative to the rest of her but that's just personal preference. I guess it's more "realistic" or whatever but I like me some wideness

>>316536 >>316555 I thought the original Tipping the Scales had a great premise. Fat girl is forced to work out and gets into fitness, fit girl ends up becoming a fat slob. I was happy for their status quo to just be Brooke being a fat slob and Olivia being a gym girl who unsuccessfully tries to get her to lose weight. It was a nice one-shot thing. Now they're both fat, but they go to the gym, and Brooke seems to want to lose weight while also not wanting to? I expected Olivia would get fat again but Salt's trying to have them be super fat *and* in shape and it doesn't work. Not to mention the fact Brooke hasn't even gained any visible weight ("Breaking the Scales" my ass).

Your daily BWS shit flinging bores me

>>316568 who knows? maybe the last two pages will be "wg sequence" for brooke or both even!

Salt will have my forgiveness when he draws more of SELENE'S BLACK FRIEND!

Breaking the Scales feels really underwhelming. I thought it would be a hot comic about both Olivia and Brooke or immobile but it just turned to a weight loss comic. That's so basic.

>>316444 At least Olivia is back up to her old weight, or at least close to it. Hopefully in the next couple pages she ends up fatter than she used to be…

>>316538 What are sages?

Who got the list of the characters in the sketches? I want to skim for certain characters

salt is forever the biggest faggot on earth for not bothering to actually draw brooke eating on page 5 of bts and instead opting for npc's reacting to it

>>316605 basically ways to prevent threads from being bumped because you just don't like it

>>316651 I dunno why I felt this but I've thought the nude alt as a fan edit for the longest time.

>>316572 Oh boy, 2 pages out of 17. I wouldn't actually want them to get much bigger than Brooke's current size because Salt's blobs can get very iffy, but I don't get the point of this one at all. A basic 5-page thing where they both end up fat is all it needed to be.

>>316435 >>316459 What didn't you like about Beach Stuff? >>316477 Wait'll you hear about Pixiveo. >>316518 >BWS recent work How recent? Does it include pin-ups and sequels, or just the comics? >>316522 >>316555 Bait, but fuck it. Fat girls working out is sexy, Anon. Cute girls doing cute things in cute fat ways" is cute and sexy. I do agree he could experiment more with explicit sex, sequential tension and splash page reveals.

>>316687 Fat girls working out or doing cute stuff is cute, but it's more of a one page or single panel thing and not something the whole comic should be about.

I don't know what everyone elses reason is for liking fat girls, but for me it's the thought of that they can get bigger and how hot it would be fucking them. I think That's the general reason behind it for most people. If BWS changed his mindset from finding fat girls hot and horny to just cute and wholesome then why post nsfw edits?

>>316687 >Fat girls working out is sexy, Anon. Cute girls doing cute things in cute fat ways" is cute and sexy I'd agree with you if this was a normal story. The whole appeal of this situation is seeing the girl attempting to lose weight while making an utter mess out of herself, in public no less, perhaps without giving up at first but as her eating habits outpace her working out routine she simply lets herself go at the end. Salt himself understand this appeal, he literally wrote a short story like this about Nat and Chloe that was much more interesting than this whole comic. The idea of the fat girl persevering and still going to the gym without losing or gaining any weight and ending with "FAT AND MOBILE :DDDD" is just baffling to me >>316697 The literal meaning of fetish is >A strong sexual attraction to an object, material, or non-genital body part that is needed for sexual arousal The idea of fucking isn't necessarily included, which should be obvious to almost everyone following most artists in the scene. Mind you that Salt himself is among the few western artists that actually draws hardcore sex and masturbation from time to time >If BWS changed his mindset from finding fat girls hot and horny to just cute and wholesome then why post nsfw edits? He never "changed his mindset". You have more than 10 years of content to go through and verify that it has always been like this. Hell, the first time he actually did sex was just 3 years ago. And NSFW edits have nothing to do with this, you seem confused

>>316570 That Santa one is peak

>>316699 All im trying to say is that if your making a porn comic then the story really isn't relevant because people just want something they can jack off to in 5 minutes. Doujinshis and normal porn are the best examples where its just the first page/2 min are explanation and the rest is just sex. The same structure should be applied to fat porn too.

>>316530 Schizo thread is down the hall and to the right

>>316699 that's good stuff. if every plot is just going to be "gain weight and feel unashamed" then I'd at least like some more shots of sweaty girls in tight gym wear

>>316758 You can have "gain weight and feel unashamed" in every comic just with a different setting and it would work if done well enough. Examples: Fitness girl gets fat after trying a new "workout routine". Bakery owner gets fat after finding a new secret baking ingredient. Chef gets fat after finding a new secret cooking ingredient. Delivery girl gets fat after getting food instead of tips. Detective gets fat overtime after failing to catch the criminal Ect... These concept examples can easily be used (and some already have) and all it takes is just good art and writting meanwhile BWS is here giving girls depression and acting like getting obese is the anwser to their problems....

You people are some faggot ass losers

>>316761 holy fuck need that fuuko

>>316761 This is the second time he's drawn Arche, is she a new favorite of his or something?

>>316631 anyone? please?

>>316421 Sooo does anyone has the second one??

Gonna be 20 pages now

>>316863 peakkk, Brooke is so cute. hope we get a sheet of her someday, i'm curious what her surname is

she's definitely bigger now, goodness. for some reason belly at the knees is my ideal SSBBW look. there's something so cathartic and undeniable about a girl being so fat her belly hangs over her knees. & those arms are giving honey glazed ham.

>>316863 >Buying food at a themepark. BRUH. That food tray probably cost more than a season pass.

>>316863 incredible how the hottest part of the comic, the role reversal, is now completely gone in favor of generic duo gain number infinity from salt. subbed specifically because I liked the premise of this comic, what a disappointment

>>316863 >>316880 Truthnuke. I mean the page is pretty hot but within context it sucks. May as well just go all the way and make them fall completely into explicitly gay feederism.

>>316572 Salt reads the chans lol

>>316863 Bro really said "fuck it the rest is gonna be just timeskips"

>>316880 There is nothing hot about a cute redhead losing weight

>>316923 So fatpornbrained that you can't see that an in-shape Olivia would be incredibly hot. Her domming and body shaming Brooke to the maximum would've been incredible.

>>316863 If it ends with "We're both near-immobile, but thanks to the work-out we can still move around somehow", it's the best ending.

>>316874 Brooke has that SSBBW Adeline (RIP) physique. Meanwhile, Olivia kinda looks like if Housecow grew a double belly.

>>316935 >Olivia kinda looks like if Housecow grew a double belly. And had Boberry's meaty arms. Actually, now that I think of it; her design at this point kinda looks like Foxy Roxxie but with bigger tits, lol.

>>316925 Fat Olivia >>> Fat Brooke As simple as that

>>316940 Second this, her fat balance is just perfect having a meatball body shape but with huge thighs too and dont get me started with those fatty arms, boobs and face or even her belly shape.

>>316863 I'm glad Salt decided to extend this by another 3 pages, because let's be honest, we ALL knew he wasn't finishing this in ONLY 17 pages.

>>316863 I don't like how unattractive Brooke's obesity is, so it's sad to think Olivia will reach that same size, she's really cute and appealing at her size rn.

>>316997 I just wish they fucked or had a whole stuffing sequence

>>316344 Black-haired girl, whatever her name even was, really is the ugliest fatso Salt has drawn. Her proportions are hideous.

>>317015 blasphemy

>>317015 Brooke. The red head is named Olivia. Again, the design for Brooke's body at her fattest is very clearly modeled off of SSBBW Adeline (who reached >700lbs before, y'know)

>>317015 It's not a conventionally attractive shape even for that fetish but there's some potential and I wouldn't say she's hideous

>>317015 Yep, I'd say it's a "realistic body"—I hate realism.

>>317045 Seems like he modeled her after Adeline tbh.

>See the 11k Milestone Sequence Polls >Who's winning each poll? >Cynthia (Pokémon) >Already has a full-piece and a good couple sketches >Fern (Frieren) >Already has a full-piece and a good couple sketches >Mt. Lady >Already has a full-piece, an explicit edit, and a good couple sketches >Hilda (Pokémon) >Already has two full-pieces, an explicit edit, and a good couple sketches Are Salt's patrons all afraid to fap to any different character?

>>317057 As long as it's not Lucy and her other iterations, I do not care.

>>317057 At a certain point you have to wonder if picking one winner out of *eighty* different characters is a bad idea. Even if an actual interesting character won, there's no way 90% of people aren't unhappy.

>>317057 Not to sound conspiratorial but all of the winners were also within the first names listed in their respective polls lmao

>>317057 Hey, at the very least, it's NOT Lucy or Rebecca.

>>317059 This body shape sucks. >>316940 It's like Olivia should've been the fatter one the whole time.

>>317057 Bws patrons are legitimately some of the most brain dead cattle out there. It doesn’t matter what poll, sketch upgrade, prequel or sequel they’ll always vote for the biggest mount of lard ever the pose is shit. Bunch of blobfags

>>317070 Bro what are you even whining about, the poll doesn't have sizes it's just characters

>>317070 Bro calm down, it ain’t that big of a deal.

>>317067 Ey don't diss my girl Violet

>>317059 Anyone got that full sequence from her with the purple background?

>>317059 Looking at the recent poll results is utterly depressing, so I gotta pull up salts best piece ever especially now that Vie is topical again Post your favourite pieces, we gotta trudge out of this slough

>>317144 Salt needs more alt OCS fr

>>317144 Why couldn't this be Olivia and Brooke

>>317153 Because I paid for it to be Vie. Sorry not sorry

>>317156 Lmao get rekt

>>317153 Theyre both built like filing cabinets, peak art is reserved for the peak OC's

>>317067 Her shape is perfect. Too bad the only actual pear-shaped OC of his is Nicole and she doesn't get drawn much and doesn't even have her own sheet. Nat's shape is pear-shaped from time to time but Salt has never settled for it

So it turns out you need to pay Salt directly to see anything good

>>317049 I don't mind realism texture-wise but there are still liberties taken here. I mean she should be in a scooter at that size. There is also a spectrum to how much people here enjoy fatties, some people enjoy the realistic soft flabby fat like how salt draws, and some people prefer them to be fat with more abstract and robust volume. Similar to how anime girls don't have realistic boobs. For me personally seeing them at this size is kind of sad and I personally am not attracted to it because the appeal of this fetish for me is the escapism of a giant soft girl that can barely fit in tight clothing. I like how Salt does that. I don't like fupa or pancake stack legs.

>>317165 You guys can only bitch if you are paying for his stuff.

>>317057 It's a shame because I like all four of these characters but it's just so disappointing that interesting/different options stand absolutely no chance in polls. I understand from a "make the most people possible happy" and that the job is much easier when you get stuck drawing the same characters over and over (as opposed to learning how to draw someone new) but still.

>>317144 Actually, since posting this ive been thinking about Breaking the Scales and other Salt sequences since Losing Control, and I do have some thoughts: I think Losing Control really succeeded because it didnt need to be in color or have complicated shading, giving more time for storyboarding and figuring out cool visuals Every sequence since then feels like its sort of rushed through that process so it can be out in time and in color, alongside all the other art Salt does in the meanwhile. Amazingly, almost every single sequence feels very sloppily shaded and the plot is almost like its figured out as it goes. Does anyone else feel that way? Anyway, we need a "best of" folder for all the actually good art Salt does

>>317205 Throw in some of that actually peak salt art too while im at it

>>317205 Eh, Losing Control DOES HAVE "complicated shading". In fact, you could say he put more effort into it than his other comics which is why he only posted a single page weekly. Newer comics like Breaking the Scales are basically like "colored sketch" quality compared to it, probably so the pages come out faster. I believe that the problem is that Salt doesn't have a proper manuscript/storyboard before starting to work on the actual pages, which could explain why he always announces extra pages towards the end of each comic. Another issue is that he's way too risk-averse, he sticks to low-stakes plots without meaningful conflicts or character shifts so any interesting setup or theme the comic had at first ends up being executed in an unsatisfying way, leading to a predictable plot that just makes you go "that's it?" by the end. I understand that he's making these as if they were "Slice of Life anime" but he seems to be missing some of the important details such as key story moments, internal struggles, subtle character growth, overarching themes and the like that would make these comics much better

>>317211 I have to concur with alot of this, though I do still feel that Salt got away with a lot of the sloppiness that comes with a rapid release schedule by utilising the "grainy" filter which gives it a very low contrast look, and that shading is really nothing special either. On your point about storyboarding though I fully agree. Even in Losing Control you can notice that once the comic needs to wrap up, the tone has a huge and jarring shift from "getting fat sucks and everything's hard" to "i like it tho :) and she lived happily ever after". It's not as blatant as later sequences, but even after making it Salt mentioned struggling with it at points. Guess theres always been trouble in paradise?

>>317211 >In fact, you could say he put more effort into it than his other comics Yeah while overall I like it compared to his colored shorts, it's clear that he went a bit overboard with the application of screentones. It can look a bit amateurish, at times. He probably wouldn't have to worry about getting the moiré effect if he had more confidence in his panel compositions and line work.

>>317205 I think that if you don't have an idea how to pace and write a story then hire a writer and work together on figuring out where you want to go. BWS makes like 5k a month so im sure giving 200 a month to a writer wont be that big of a hit for him

>>317211 Thing is, a lot of people complain about anything so Salt probably has a hard time committing. People will cry if it isn’t a happy ending, people will be bored and angry if time is dedicated to character conflict and development rather than fanservice, and people also bitch when it’s the reverse. Honestly I don’t envy him, or any comic creator in the space.

>>317221 His fans throw him thousands a month and eat it all up, no need to feel bad for him. Personally I love his art, especially when he really goes above and beyond for it. When it comes to his less good stuff, it's just fun to discuss where it could have gone in a better direction, knowing his actual talent. This is a BWS thread after all, right?

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>>317219 >can look a bit amateurish, at times. It almost looks *too* clean, if that makes sense? The obvious benefit in using screentones is how much you can cheaply add depth and shading to any scene without having to go through the rigamarole of manual hatching, but that doesn't exclude hatching altogether. At times, Losing Control looks like a full-color comic that was simply converted to B&W, rather than a comic that was made for B&W print in mind to begin with.

>>317231 Yeah and you better get used to it Jimmy

>>317226 God to see that first thing in the morning and hug her from behind would be peak

Wow years ago they make an edit of the two of them fat together and look at them now😁

Welp. Breaking the scales is over.

>>317245 We already know there's 3 more pages of this

>>317243 >mmm 11k for scraps of fats in a fucking comic >wastes 15 pages in shoehorned drama Would been a hundred times better if 80% of the comic was them getting here and bigger instead of this "whip cream on a burnt pancake" that we got... too fucking late

Now were probably gonna have a Saxxon situation of "uhhh goes blob in two pages" >Plot fags got bored of their sauceless wish >Fanservice fags got shafted Just hire a damn writer already Salt, you have the budget.

>>317243 this is how you write an actual good comic: https://e-hentai.org/g/3996825/88d883cd17/ It just focuses on the parts that people actually care for which is sex and girls getting fatter. No complicated story or filler pages. Just sequences and a page or two showing the aftermath. Could have easily just done an even of them trying to see who can feed the other more and everyone would have been happy, but that's too much work so lets just literally draw 2 fat fat girls on the couch doing nothing and call it a day.

>>317243 Mf i would take a 3 page comic of them on that marathon, sweaty, panting, jiggling and wheezing just to eat the equivalent of a chunk of their body weight in fastfood after tapping out 5 minutes into the competition, over this mess. The peak chases him, but the nigga is just faster in spewing slop.

>>317243 Olivia is now slightly bigger than how she started in Tipping the Scales, while Brooke continues to be the slow gainer. We'll see if Salt will make this go to Day 1,000 like in how Tipping the Scales ended, or if this is where their gains end. At the rate the two are going, it's possible for Olivia to catch up or surpass Brooke.

With Olivia gaining her weight back, this also means Salt no longer has an OC who is a standard BBW. Blob: Selene Immobile: Val USSBBW: Brooke Courtney Chloe SSBBW: Olivia Nat (Was USSBBW for one pic, but the next pic didn't keep her that big since it was a dream) Sammy Shannon Nicole Kate Brie BBW: Chubby: Thin: Halie

>>317264 This is why I wanted a continual role reversal. Salt just has way too many supersized girls to the point where there's no diversity. It's all 600+ pound women getting into the same kind of escapades. It's very boring after a certain point. Like Brooke separated herself from Courtney by being glum, genuinely slobbish, and (For a better word) stinky. Now she's back to being up in spirits again and Olivia is as big as when she started. Sammy exists, you don't need a second huge woman (That can still stand) that at some point was involved in fitness. It's the same issue Mochimochiland has. He (?) runs his two pairs of OCs through the same scenario of a gay feeder-feedee relationship to the point where I honestly confuse the two at times. Salt keeping all his girls around the same size just causes him to need to cycle through the same shit ad nauseam because he doesn't have any OCs that can be used for different shit.

>>317269 No one cares about your role reversal fetish, we want them fatter

>>317264 Patron OCs are kinda kinda diverse! Take a look at Siv for example

>>317269 I would've liked the double role reversal too, having Brooke slim back down to being a smaller size while Olivia got much fatter than where Brooke is right now.

I swear all thats missing is for BWS to use ai for this to be the worst coming hes ever made

when fanart is better than the source (by Flabjacks)

>>317273 The appeal of having so many OCs is being able to do different things with them. If every character is the exact same cookie-cutter plot/weight/shape/personality, then all that accomplishes is making people unhappy because more OCs means more time between drawings of any given one of them. If all you want from this comic is "the hot redheaded one gets fatter" then fair enough, but the thing that actually made Olivia and Brooke unique was the role reversal/size contrast from the first comic, Brooke being moody and pretty slobby, and Olivia being smaller and having some level of "fitness". IMO, Olivia being almost as big as Brooke now makes them both look smaller cause there's no contrast. And it'll be uninteresting if they end the comic just being two happy fat friends.