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As someone who dislikes both of these artists and think they both (usually) write absolute slop, even I have to agree that Pixiveo is better at writing than Kip.
Most of Kips comics keep meandering around the same relationshit drama over and over for hundreds of pages in an eternal "will they won't they."
One Serving Choice also added plenty of characters cheating on and betraying one another in addition to the problems No Lunch Break had.
I think one of the more egregious things Kip did was his reaction to Sandy being the most popular character in NLB was to turn her from a rare side character autist into a regular occurrence who then became a very stupidly thought out one dimensional antagonist. A plot that fell flat for many, many reasons, one of those things leading to the rat eating which was another shitstorm and the large amount of awful people that were already regular characters.
Basically a big problem with Kip is he tends to prefer writing characters with shitty personalities you could find in real life but with wings for ears, it doesn't feel satisfying to read and you kind of want half the cast or more to get hit by a vehicle, not to launch them into an isekai but into a hospital