>>164027
Hard agree on this.
The plot has turned the only token male into a cuck who only exists to be criticised and pepper-sprayed. It's not even funny, it just comes across as unfunny man-bashing and padding.
Meanwhile, all the uninteresting crap about the relationship between 'berrygirl' and 'token male' has been not just tedious (this is porn, not a relationship advice column), but poorly written and really poorly presented. That attempt to have the conversations cutting into each other is a really poor attempt at an already questionable technique that only ever works if the writer is sufficiently clever.
>>164554
Agree. The cartoony style might make his work quicker to produce, but it's ended up making the faces and shapes unerotic.
It's like this is no longer porn, it's just a slightly risque comic trying to be a cartoon. (Maybe that's the intent - to cut out the 'naughty' parts so it can be sold innocently?)
The original 'Pick, Don't Eat' was much sexier than anything the follow-up comics have had, except for maybe the shower scenes and Casey near the end of 'What-a-Melon'.
I remember really loving 'Second Shift' back in the day, particularly the first and second panels. I haven't felt the same about his work in quite a long time now. At least since the original 'Pick, Don't Eat'.